Elements of Style
William Strunk, Jr.
Professor of English
John Woldemar Cowan
Copyright © 2006
Ithaca, New York
By William Strunk, Jr.
Press of W. P. Humphrey, Geneva, N.Y.
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II. Elementary Rules of Usage
1. Form the possessive singular
ofnouns with 's 2. In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last 3. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas 4. Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause 5. Do not join independent clauses by a comma 6. Do not break sentences in two 7. A participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical subject 8. Dividewords at line-ends,in accordance with their formationand pronunciation
III. Elementary Principles of Composition
9. Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic
10. As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning 11. Use the active voice 12. Put statements in positive form 13. Omit needless words 14. Avoid a succession of loose sentences 15. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form 16. Keep related words together 17. In summaries, keep to one tense 18. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end
IV. A Few Matters of Form
V. Words and Expressions Commonly Misused
VI. Words Commonly Misspelled
This book is intended for use in English courses in which the
practice of composition is combined with the study of literature. It
aims to give in brief space the principal requirements of plain
English style. It aims to lighten the task of instructor and student
by concentrating attention (in
and III) on a few essentials, the rules of
usage and principles of composition most commonly violated. The
numbers of the sections may be used as references in correcting
The book covers only a small portion of the field of English style, but the experience of its writer has been that once past the essentials, students profit most by individual instruction based on the problems of their own work, and that each instructor has his own body of theory, which he prefers to that offered by any textbook.
The writer's colleagues in the Department of English in Cornell University have greatly helped him in the preparation of his manuscript. Mr. George McLane Wood has kindly consented to the inclusion under Rule 11 of some material from his Suggestions to Authors.
The following books are recommended for reference or further
study: in connection with
Chapters II and
IV, F. Howard Collins, Author and
Printer (Henry Frowde); Chicago University Press, Manual of
Style; T. L. De Vinne Correct Composition (The Century
Company); Horace Hart, Rules for Compositors and Printers
(Oxford University Press); George McLane Wood, Extracts from the
Style-Book of the Government Printing Office (United States
Geological Survey); in connection with Chapters
III and V, Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch,
The Art of Writing (Putnams), especially the chapter,
Interlude on Jargon; George McLane Wood, Suggestions to
Authors (United States Geological Survey); John Leslie Hall,
English Usage (Scott, Foresman and Co.); James P. Kelly,
Workmanship in Words (Little, Brown and Co.).
It is an old observation that the best writers sometimes disregard the rules of rhetoric. When they do so, however, the reader will usually find in the sentence some compensating merit, attained at the cost of the violation. Unless he is certain of doing as well, he will probably do best to follow the rules. After he has learned, by their guidance, to write plain English adequate for everyday uses, let him look, for the secrets of style, to the study of the masters of literature.
Follow this rule whatever the final consonant. Thus write,
the witch's malice
This is the usage of the United States Government Printing Office and of the Oxford University Press.
Exceptions are the possessives of ancient proper names in -es and -is, the possessive Jesus', and such forms as for conscience' sake, for righteousness' sake. But such forms as Achilles' heel, Moses' laws, Isis' temple are commonly replaced by
the heel of
the laws of Moses
the temple of Isis
pronominal possessives hers, its, theirs, yours, and
oneself have no apostrophe.
red, white, and blue
honest, energetic, but headstrong
He opened the letter, read it, and made a note of its contents.
This is also the usage of the Government Printing Office and of
the Oxford University Press.
In the names of business firms the last comma is omitted, as
Brown, Shipley and Company
even if only a single term comes before it, is always preceded by a
Among the injured were Emory P. Gray, of Oyster Bay, New York; Norman Bean of Chicago; and Ignatius Donnelly, the Sage of Nininger
The best way to see a country, unless you are pressed for time, is to travel on foot.
This rule is difficult to apply; it is frequently hard
whether a single word, such as however ,
or a brief phrase, is or is not parenthetic. If the interruption to
the flow of the sentence is but slight, the writer may safely omit
the commas. But whether the interruption be slight or considerable,
he must never omit one comma and leave the other. Such punctuation
Marjorie's husband, Colonel Nelson paid us a visit yesterday,
My brother you will be pleased to hear, is now in perfect health,
Non-restrictive relative clauses are, in accordance with this rule, set off by commas.
The audience, which had at first been indifferent, became more and more interested.
Similar clauses introduced by where and when are similarly punctuated.
In 1769, when Napoleon was born, Corsica had but recently been acquired by France.
Nether Stowey, where Coleridge wrote The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, is a few miles from Bridgewater.
In these sentences the clauses introduced by which, when, and where are non-restrictive; they do not limit the application of the words on which they depend, but add, parenthetically, statements supplementing those in the principal clauses. Each sentence is a combination of two statements which might have been made independently.
The audience was at first indifferent. Later it became more and more interested.
Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had but recently been acquired by France.
Coleridge wrote The Rime of the Ancient Mariner at Nether Stowey. Nether Stowey is only a few miles from Bridgewater.
Restrictive relative clauses are not set off by commas.
The candidate who best meets these requirements will obtain the place.
In this sentence the relative clause restricts the application of the word candidate to a single person. Unlike those above, the sentence cannot be split into two independent statements.
and jr. are always preceded by a comma, and except at the end
of a sentence, followed by one.
Similar in principle to the enclosing of parenthetic expressions between commas is the setting off by commas of phrases or dependent clauses preceding or following the main clause of a sentence. The sentences quoted in this section and under Rules 4, 5, 6, 7, 16, and 18 should afford sufficient guidance.
If a parenthetic expression is preceded by a conjunction, place
the first comma before the conjunction, not after it.
He saw us coming, and unaware that we had learned of his treachery, greeted us with a smile.
The early records of the city have disappeared, and the story of its first years can no longer be reconstructed.
The situation is perilous, but there is still one chance of escape.
Sentences of this type, isolated from their context, may seem to
be in need of rewriting. As they make complete sense when the comma
is reached, the second clause has the appearance of an after-thought.
Further, and, is the least specific of connectives. Used
between independent clauses, it indicates only that a relation exists
between them without defining that relation. In the example above,
the relation is that of cause and result. The two sentences might be
As the early records of the city have disappeared, the story of its first years can no longer be reconstructed.
Although the situation is perilous, there is still one chance of escape.
Or the subordinate clauses might be replaced by phrases:
Owing tothe disappearance of the early records of the city, the story of its first years can no longer be reconstructed.
In this perilous situation, there is still one chance of escape.
But a writer may err by making his sentences too uniformly compact
and periodic, and an occasional loose sentence prevents the style
from becoming too formal and gives the reader a certain relief.
Consequently, loose sentences of the type first quoted are common in
easy, unstudied writing. But a writer should be careful not to
construct too many
of his sentences after this pattern (see Rule
Two-part sentences of which the second member is introduced by
as (in the sense of because), for, or, nor, and
while (in the sense of and at the same time) likewise
require a comma before the
If a dependent clause, or an introductory phrase
requiring to be
set off by a comma, precedes the second independent clause, no comma
is needed after the conjunction.
The situation is perilous, but if we are prepared to act promptly, there is still one chance of escape.
For two-part sentences connected by an adverb, see the next section.
If two or more clauses, grammatically complete and not joined by a
conjunction, are to form a single
compound sentence, the proper mark
of punctuation is a semicolon.
Stevenson's romances are entertaining; they are full of exciting adventures.
It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.
It is of course equally correct to write the above as two sentences each, replacing the semicolons by periods.
Stevenson's romances are entertaining. They are full of exciting adventures.
It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
If a conjunction is inserted, the proper mark is a comma (Rule 4).
Stevenson's romances are entertaining, for they are full of exciting adventures.
It is nearly half past five, and we cannot reach town before dark.
Note that if the second clause is preceded by an adverb, such as
so, then, therefore, or thus, and
not by a conjunction, the semicolon is still required.
At that moment they heard a door slam; then feet came running along the passage.
There's five to one; besides, they all are fresh.
When the second clause begins with so, use a semicolon or a comma:
I had never been in the place
before;so I had difficulty in finding my way about. In general, however, it is best, in writing, to avoid using
so in this manner; there is danger that the writer who uses it
at all may use it too often. A simple correction, usually
serviceable, is to omit the word so, and begin the first
clause with as:
As I had never been in the place before, I had difficulty in finding my way about.
If the clauses are very short, and are alike in form, a comma is usually permissible:
Man proposes, God disposes.
The gate swung apart, the bridge fell, the portcullis was drawn up.
The fireworks were by Gandalf: they were not only brought by him, but designed and made by him.
In other words, do not use periods
I met them on a Cunard liner several years ago. Coming home from Liverpool to New York.
Hewas an interesting talker. A manwho had traveled all over the world, and lived in half a dozen countries.
In both these examples, the first period should be replaced by a comma, and the following word begun with a small letter.
It is permissible to make an emphatic word or expression serve the purpose of a sentence and to punctuate it accordingly:
Again and again he called out. No reply.
The writer must, however, be certain that the emphasis is
that he will not be suspected of a mere blunder in
Note: Rules 3, 4,
and 6 cover the most important principles in the
punctuation of ordinary sentences; they should be so thoroughly
mastered that their application becomes second nature.
Walking slowly down the road, he saw a woman accompanied by two children.
The word walking refers to the subject of the sentence, not to the woman. If the writer wishes to make it refer to the woman, he must recast the sentence:
He saw a woman, accompanied by two children, walking slowly down the road.
Participial phrases preceded by a conjunction or by a preposition, nouns in apposition, adjectives, and adjective phrases come under the same rule if they begin the sentence.
On arriving in Chicago, his friends met him at the station.
When he arrived (or, On his arrival) in Chicago, his friends met him at the station.
A soldier of proved valor, they entrusted him with the
A soldier of proved valor, he was entrusted with the
Young and inexperienced, the task seemed easy to me.
Young and inexperienced, I thought the task easy.
Without a friend to counsel
Without a friend to counsel
Sentences violating this rule are often
Being in a dilapidated condition, I was able to buy the house very cheap.
If there is room at the end of a line for one or more syllables of
a word, but not for the whole word, divide the
word, unless this
involves cutting off only a single letter, or cutting off only two
letters of a long word. No hard and fast rule for all words can be
principles most frequently applicable are:
a. Divide the word according to
its formation:know-ledge (not knowl-edge); Shake-speare (not Shakes-peare); de-scribe (not des-cribe); atmo-sphere (not atmos-phere);
b. Divide "on the vowel:"edi-ble (not ed-ible); propo-sition; ordi-nary; espe-cial; reli-gious; oppo-nents; regu-lar; classi-fi-ca-tion (three divisions possible); deco-rative; presi-dent;
c. Divide between double letters, unless they come at the end of the simple form of the word:Apen-nines; Cincin-nati; refer-ring; but tell-ing.
The treatment of consonants in combination is best shown from examples:
for-tune; pic-ture; presump-tuous; illus-tration; sub-stan-tial (either division); indus-try; instruc-tion; sug-ges-tion; incen-diary.
The student will do well to examine the syllable-division in a
number of pages of any carefully printed book.
If the subject on which you are writing is of slight extent, or if
you intend to treat it very briefly, there may be no need of
subdividing it into topics. Thus a brief description, a brief summary
of a literary work, a brief account of a single incident, a narrative
merely outlining an action, the setting forth of a single idea, any
one of these is best written in a single paragraph. After the
paragraph has been written, it should be examined to see whether
not improve it.
Ordinarily, however, a subject requires subdivision into topics,
each of which should be made the subject of a paragraph. The object
of treating each topic in a paragraph by itself is, of course, to aid
the reader. The beginning of each paragraph
is a signal to him that a
new step in the development of the subject has been reached.
The extent of subdivision will vary with the length of the composition. For example, a short notice of a book or poem might consist of a single paragraph. One slightly longer might consist of two paragraphs:
A. Account of the work.
B. Critical discussion.
A report on a poem, written for a
class in literature, might
consist of seven paragraphs:
A. Facts of composition and publication.
B. Kind of poem; metrical form.
D. Treatment of subject.
For what chiefly remarkable.
Whereincharacteristic of the writer.
G. Relationship to other works.
The contents of paragraphs C and D would vary with the poem. Usually, paragraph C would indicate the actual or imagined circumstances of the poem (the situation), if these call for explanation, and would then state the subject and outline its development. If the poem is a narrative in the third person throughout, paragraph C need contain no more than a concise summary of the action. Paragraph D would indicate the leading ideas and show how they are made prominent, or would indicate what points in the narrative are chiefly emphasized.
A novel might be discussed under the heads:
A historical event might be discussed under the heads:
A. What led up to the event.
B. Account of the event.
the event led up to.
In treating either of these last two subjects, the writer would probably find it necessary to subdivide one or more of the topics here given.
As a rule, single sentences should not be written or printed as
paragraphs. An exception may be made
of sentences of transition,
indicating the relation between the parts of an exposition or
In dialogue, each speech, even if only a single word, is a
paragraph by itself; that is, a new paragraph begins with each change
of speaker. The application of this
rule, when dialogue and narrative
are combined, is best learned from examples in well-printed works of
Again, the object is to aid the reader. The practice here
recommended enables him to discover the purpose of each paragraph as
he begins to read it, and to retain the purpose in mind as he ends
it. For this reason, the most generally useful kind of paragraph,
particularly in exposition and argument, is that in which
Ending with a digression, or with an unimportant detail, is particularly to be avoided.
If the paragraph forms part of a larger composition, its relation to what precedes, or its function as a part of the whole, may need to be expressed. This can sometimes be done by a mere word or phrase (again; therefore; for the same reason) in the topic sentence. Sometimes, however, it is expedient to precede the topic sentence by one or more sentences of introduction or transition. If more than one such sentence is required, it is generally better to set apart the transitional sentences as a separate paragraph.
According to the writer's purpose, he may, as indicated above,
relate the body of the paragraph to the topic sentence in one or more
of several different ways. He may make the meaning of the topic
sentence clearer by restating it in other forms, by defining its
terms, by denying the converse, by giving illustrations or specific
instances; he may establish it by proofs; or he may develop it by
showing its implications and consequences. In a long paragraph, he
may carry out several of these processes.
1 Now, to be properly enjoyed, a walking tour should be gone upon alone.
1 Topic sentence.
2 If you go in a company, or even in pairs, it is no longer a walking tour in anything but name; it is something else and more in the nature of a picnic.
2 The meaning made clearer
by denial of the
3 A walking tour should be gone upon alone, because freedom is of the essence; because you should be able to stop and go on, and follow this way or that, as the freak takes you; and because you must have your own pace, and neither trot alongside a champion walker, nor mince in time with a girl.
3 The topic sentence
repeated, in abridged form, and supported by three reasons;
the meaning of the third ("you must have your own pace")
made clearer by denying the
4 And you must be open to all impressions and let your thoughts take colour from what you see.
4 A fourth reason, stated in two forms.
5 You should be as a pipe for any wind to play upon.
5 The same reason, stated in still another form.
6 "I cannot see the wit," says Hazlitt, "of walking and talking at the same time.
6-7 The same reason as stated by Hazlitt.
7 When I am in the country, I wish to vegetate like the country," which is the gist of all that can be said upon the matter.
8 There should be no cackle of voices at your elbow, to jar on the meditative silence of the morning.
8 Repetition, in paraphrase, of the quotation from Hazlitt.
9 And so long as a man is
reasoning he cannot surrender himself to that fine
intoxication that comes of much motion in the open air, that
begins in a sort of dazzle and sluggishness of the brain,
and ends in a peace that passes
9 Final statement of the fourth reason, in language amplified and heightened to form a strong conclusion.
1 It was chiefly in the eighteenth century that a very different conception of history grew up.
1 Topic sentence.
2 Historians then came to believe that their task was not so much to paint a picture as to solve a problem; to explain or illustrate the successive phases of national growth, prosperity, and adversity.
2 The meaning of the topic sentence made clearer; the new conception of history defined.
3 The history of morals, of industry, of intellect, and of art; the changes that take place in manners or beliefs; the dominant ideas that prevailed in successive periods; the rise, fall, and modification of political constitutions; in a word, all the conditions of national well-being became the subjects of their works.
3 The definition expanded.
4 They sought rather to write a history of peoples than a history of kings.
4 The definition explained by contrast.
5 They looked especially in history for the chain of causes and effects.
5 The definition supplemented: another element in the new conception of history.
6 They undertook to study
in the past the physiology of nations, and hoped by applying
the experimental method on a large scale to deduce some
lessons of real value about the conditions on which the
welfare of society mainly
6 Conclusion: an important consequence of the new conception of history.
In narration and description the paragraph sometimes begins with a concise, comprehensive statement serving to hold together the details that follow.
The breeze served us admirably.
The campaign opened with a series of reverses.
The next ten or twelve pages were filled with a curious set of entries.
But this device, if too often used, would become a mannerism. More commonly the opening sentence simply indicates by its subject with what the paragraph is to be principally concerned.
At length I thought I might return towards the stockade.
Hepicked up the heavy lamp from the table and began to explore.
Another flight of steps, and they emerged on the roof.
The brief paragraphs of animated narrative, however, are often without even this semblance of a topic sentence. The break between them serves the purpose of a rhetorical pause, throwing into prominence some detail of the action.
The active voice is usually more direct and vigorous than the passive:
I shall always remember my first visit to Boston.
This is much better than
My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me.
The latter sentence is less direct, less bold, and less concise. If the writer tries to make it more concise by omitting "by me,"
My first visit to Boston will always be
it becomes indefinite: is it the writer, or some person undisclosed, or the world at large, that will always remember this visit?
This rule does not, of course, mean that the writer should entirely discard the passive voice, which is frequently convenient and sometimes necessary.
The dramatists of the Restoration are little esteemed
Modern readers have little esteem for the dramatists of the Restoration.
The first would be the right form in a paragraph on the dramatists of the Restoration; the second, in a paragraph on the tastes of modern readers. The need of making a particular word the subject of the sentence will often, as in these examples, determine which voice is to be used.
The habitual use of the active voice, however, makes for
writing. This is true not only in narrative principally concerned
with action, but in writing of any kind. Many a tame sentence of
description or exposition can be made lively and emphatic by
substituting a transitive in the active voice for some such
perfunctory expression as there is, or could be
There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground.
Dead leaves covered the ground.
The sound of the falls could still be heard.
The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.
Failing health compelled him to leave college.
It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.
He soon repented his words.
As a rule, avoid making one passive depend directly upon another.
Gold was not allowed to be exported.
It was forbidden to export gold (The export of gold was prohibited).
He has been proved to have been seen entering the building.
It has been proved that he was seen to enter the building.
In both the examples above, before correction, the word properly related to the second passive is made the subject of the first.
A common fault is to use as the subject of a passive construction a noun which expresses the entire action, leaving to the verb no function beyond that of completing the sentence.
A survey of this region was made in 1900.
This region was surveyed in 1900.
Mobilization of the army was rapidly carried out.
The army was rapidly mobilized.
Confirmation of these reports cannot be obtained.
These reports cannot be confirmed.
Compare the sentence, "The export of gold was prohibited," in which the predicate "was prohibited" expresses something not implied in "export."
Make definite assertions. Avoid tame, colorless, hesitating, non-committal language. Use the word not as a means of denial or in antithesis, never as a means of evasion.
He was not very often on time.
He usually came late.
The Taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare's works.
The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.
The last example, before correction, is indefinite as well as negative. The corrected version, consequently, is simply a guess at the writer's intention.
All three examples show the weakness inherent in the word
not. Consciously or unconsciously, the reader is dissatisfied
with being told only what is
not; he wishes to be told what is.
Hence, as a rule, it is better to express a negative in positive
did not remember
did not pay any attention to
did not have much confidence in
The antithesis of negative and positive is strong:
Not charity, but simple justice.
Not that I loved Caesar less, but Rome the more.
Negative words other than not are usually strong:
The sun never
setsupon the British flag.
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no
words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same
reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine
no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his
sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects
only in outline, but that every word tell.
Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
the question as to whether
whether (the question whether)
there is no doubt but that
no doubt (doubtless)
used for fuel purposes
he is a man who
in a hasty manner
on a daily basis
this is a subject which
His story is a strange one.
His story is strange.
especial the expression the fact that should be revised
out of every sentence in which it occurs.
owing to the fact that
in spite of the fact that
call your attention to the fact that
remind you (notify
I was unaware of the fact that
I was unaware
the fact that he had not succeeded
the fact that I had arrived
See also under
system in Chapter
Who is, which was, and the like are often superfluous.
His brother, who is a member of the same firm
His brother, a member of the same firm
Trafalgar, which was Nelson's last battle
Trafalgar, Nelson's last battle
As positive statement is more concise than negative, and the active voice more concise than the passive, many of the examples given under Rules 11 and 12 illustrate this rule as well.
A common violation of conciseness is the presentation of a single
complex idea, step by step, in a series of sentences which might
advantage be combined into one.
Macbeth was very ambitious. This led him to wish to become king of Scotland. The witches told him that this wish of his would come true. The king of Scotland at this time was Duncan. Encouraged by his wife, Macbeth murdered Duncan. He was thus enabled to succeed Duncan as king. (55 words.)
Encouraged by his wife, Macbeth achieved his ambition and
This rule refers
especially to loose sentences of a particular
type, those consisting of two co-ordinate clauses, the second
introduced by a conjunction or relative. Although single sentences of
this type may be unexceptionable (see under Rule 4),
a series soon becomes monotonous and tedious.
unskilful writer will sometimes construct a whole paragraph of
sentences of this kind, using as connectives and, but, and
less frequently, who, which, when, where, and while,
these last in non-restrictive senses (see under Rule 3).
The third concert of the subscription series was given last evening, and a large audience was in attendance. Mr. Edward Appleton was the soloist, and the Boston Symphony Orchestra furnished the instrumental music. The former showed himself to be an artist of the first rank, while the latter proved itself fully deserving of its high reputation. The interest aroused by the series has been very gratifying to the Committee, and it is planned to give a similar series annually hereafter. The fourth concert will be given on Tuesday, May 10, when an equally attractive
programmewill be presented.
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and sing-song. Contrast with them the sentences in the paragraphs quoted under Rule 10, or in any piece of good English prose, as the preface (Before the Curtain) to Vanity Fair.
If the writer finds
that he has written a series of sentences of
the type described, he should recast enough of them to remove the
monotony, replacing them by simple sentences, by sentences of two
clauses joined by a semicolon, by periodic sentences of two clauses,
by sentences, loose or periodic, of three clauseswhichever best
represent the real relations of the thought.
This principle, that of parallel construction, requires that
expressions of similar content and function should be outwardly
similar. The likeness of form enables the reader to recognize more
readily the likeness of content and function. Familiar instances from
the Bible are the Ten Commandments, the Beatitudes, and the
of the Lord's Prayer.
unskilful writer often violates this principle, from a
mistaken belief that he should constantly vary the form of his
expressions. It is true that in repeating a statement in order to
emphasize it he may have need to vary its form. For illustration, see
the paragraph from Stevenson quoted under Rule 10.
But apart from this, he should follow the principle of parallel
Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.
Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.
The left-hand version gives the impression that the writer is
timid; he seems unable or afraid to choose one form of
expression and hold to it. The right-hand version shows that the
writer has at least made his choice and abided by it.
By this principle, an article or a preposition applying to all the members of a series must either be used only before the first term or else be repeated before each term.
The French, the Italians, Spanish, and Portuguese
The French, the Italians, the Spanish, and the Portuguese
In spring, summer, or in winter
In spring, summer, or winter (In spring, in summer, or in winter)
Correlative expressions (both, and; not, but; not only, but also; either, or; first, second, third; and the like) should be followed by the same grammatical construction. Many violations of this rule can be corrected by rearranging the sentence.
It was both a long ceremony and very tedious.
The ceremony was both long and tedious.
A time not for words, but action
A time not for words, but for action
Either you must grant his request or incur his ill will.
You must either grant his request or incur his ill will.
See also the third example under Rule 12 and the last under Rule 13.
It may be
asked, what if a writer needs to express a very large
number of similar ideas, say twenty? Must he write twenty consecutive
sentences of the same pattern? On closer examination he will probably
find that the difficulty is imaginary, that his twenty ideas can be
classified in groups, and that he need apply the principle only
within each group. Otherwise he had best avoid the difficulty by
putting his statements in the form of a table.
The position of the words in a sentence is the principal means of
showing their relationship.
The writer must therefore, so far as
possible, bring together the words, and groups of words, that are
related in thought, and keep apart those which are not so
The subject of a sentence and the principal verb should not, as a
rule, be separated by a phrase or clause that can be transferred to
Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.
In the fifth book of The Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church.
Cast iron, when treated in a Bessemer converter, is changed into steel.
The objection is that the interposed phrase or clause needlessly
interrupts the natural order of the main clause. This objection,
however, does not usually hold when the order is interrupted only by
a relative clause or by
an expression in apposition. Nor does it hold
in periodic sentences in which the interruption is a deliberately
used means of creating suspense (see examples under Rule 18). The relative pronoun should come, as a rule, immediately after its
There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.
In his eye was a look that boded mischief.
He wrote three articles about his adventures in Spain, which were published in Harper's Magazine.
He published in Harper's Magazine three articles about his adventures in Spain.
This is a portrait of Benjamin Harrison, grandson of William Henry Harrison, who became President in 1889.
This is a portrait of Benjamin Harrison, grandson of William Henry Harrison. He became President in 1889.
If the antecedent consists of a group of words, the relative comes at the end of the group, unless this would cause ambiguity.
A proposal to amend the Sherman Act, which has been variously judged
A proposal, which has been variously judged, to amend the Sherman Act
A proposal to amend the much-debated Sherman Act
The grandson of William Henry Harrison, who
William Henry Harrison's grandson, Benjamin Harrison, who
in apposition may come between antecedent and relative,
because in such a combination no real ambiguity can arise.
The Duke of York, his brother, who was regarded with hostility by the Whigs
Modifiers should come, if possible next to the word they modify.
If several expressions modify the same word, they should be so
arranged that no
wrong relation is suggested.
All the members were not present.
Not all the members were present.
Major R. E. Joyce will give a lecture on Tuesday evening in Bailey Hall, to which the public is invited, on "My Experiences in Mesopotamia" at eight P. M.
On Tuesday evening at eight P. M., Major R. E. Joyce will give in Bailey Hall a lecture on "My Experiences in Mesopotamia." The public is invited.
In summarizing the action of a drama, the writer should always use
the present tense. In summarizing a poem, story, or novel,
preferably use the present, though he may use the past if he prefers.
If the summary is in the present tense, antecedent action should be
expressed by the perfect; if in the past, by the past perfect.
An unforeseen chance prevents Friar John from delivering Friar Lawrence's letter to Romeo. Juliet, meanwhile, owing to her father's arbitrary change of the day set for her wedding, has been compelled to drink the potion on Tuesday night, with the result that Balthasar informs Romeo of her supposed death before Friar Lawrence learns
of the nondelivery of the letter.
But whichever tense
be used in the summary, a past tense in
indirect discourse or in indirect question remains unchanged.
The Legate inquires who struck the blow.
Apart from the exceptions noted, whichever tense
chooses, he should use throughout. Shifting from one tense to the
other gives the appearance of uncertainty and irresolution (compare
In presenting the statements or the thought of some one else, as
in summarizing an essay or reporting a speech, the writer should
intercalating such expressions as "he said," "he stated," "the
speaker added," "the speaker then went on to say," "the author also
thinks," or the like. He should indicate clearly at the outset, once
for all, that what follows is summary, and then waste no words in
repeating the notification.
In notebooks, in newspapers, in handbooks of literature,
of one kind or another may be indispensable, and for children in
primary schools it is a useful exercise to retell a story in their
own words. But in the criticism or interpretation of literature the
writer should be careful to avoid dropping into summary. He may find
it necessary to devote one or two sentences to indicating the
subject, or the opening situation, of the work he is discussing; he
may cite numerous details to illustrate its qualities. But he should
aim to write an orderly discussion supported by evidence, not a
summary with occasional comment. Similarly, if the scope of his
discussion includes a number of works, he will as a rule do better
not to take them up singly in chronological order, but to aim from
the beginning at establishing general conclusions.
The proper place for the word, or group of words, which the writer desires to make most prominent is usually the end of the sentence.
Humanity has hardly advanced in
This steel is principally used for making razors, because of its hardness.
Because of its hardness, this steel is principally used in making razors.
The word or group of words entitled to this position of prominence
is usually the
logical predicate, that is, the new element in
the sentence, as it is in the second example.
The effectiveness of the periodic sentence arises from the prominence which it gives to the main statement.
Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as a set-off against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.
With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.
The other prominent position in the sentence is the beginning. Any element in the sentence, other than the subject, becomes emphatic when placed first.
Deceit or treachery he could never forgive.
So vast and rude, fretted by the action of nearly three thousand years, the fragments of this architecture may often
seem,at first sight,like works of nature.
coming first in its sentence may be emphatic, but hardly
by its position alone. In the sentence,
Great kings worshipped at his shrine,
the emphasis upon kings arises largely from its meaning and from the context. To receive special emphasis, the subject of a sentence must take the position of the predicate.
Through the middle of the valley flowed a winding stream.
The principle that the proper place for what is to be made most prominent is the end applies equally to the words of a sentence, to the sentences of a paragraph, and to the paragraphs of a composition.
Headings. Leave a blank line, or its
equivalent in space, after the title or heading of a manuscript. On
succeeding pages, if using ruled paper, begin on the first line.
Numerals. Do not spell out dates or other
serial numbers. Write them in figures or in Roman notation, as may be
August 9, 1918
|Parentheses. A sentence containing an
expression in parenthesis is punctuated, outside of the marks of
parenthesis, exactly as if the expression in parenthesis were absent.
The expression within is punctuated as if it stood by itself, except
that the final stop is omitted unless it is a question mark or an
I went to his house yesterday (my third attempt to see him), but he had left town.
Hedeclares (and why should we doubt hisgood faith?) that heis now certain of success.
(When a wholly detached expression or sentence is parenthesized,
the final stop comes before the last
mark of parenthesis.)
Dashes may be used in pairs in
the same way as parentheses, except that dashes emphasize rather than
minimize the impact of their contents. No punctuation mark (other than a
question point or exclamation mark, if required by the set-off material)
is used adjacent to a dash. Singly, dashes should be avoided except to
indicate an abrupt change in thought:
I was hoping that you might — no, never mind.
Quotations. Formal quotations, cited as documentary evidence, are introduced by a colon and enclosed in quotation marks.
The provision of the Constitution is: "No tax or duty shall be laid on articles exported from any state."
Quotations grammatically in apposition or the direct objects of verbs are preceded by a comma and enclosed in quotation marks.
I recall the maxim of La Rochefoucauld, "Gratitude is a lively sense of benefits to come."
Aristotle says, "Art is an imitation of nature."
Quotations of an entire
line, or more, of verse, are begun on a
fresh line and centred, but not enclosed in quotation marks.
Wordsworth's enthusiasm for the Revolution was at first unbounded:
Bliss was it in that dawn to be alive,
But to be young was very heaven!
Quotations introduced by that are regarded as in indirect discourse and not enclosed in quotation marks.
Keats declares that beauty is truth, truth beauty.
Proverbial expressions and familiar phrases of literary origin require no quotation marks.
These are the times that try men's souls.
He lives far from the madding crowd.
The same is true of colloquialisms and slang.
References. In scholarly work requiring exact
references, abbreviate titles that occur frequently, giving the full
forms in an alphabetical list at the end.
As a general practice, give
the references in
parenthesis or in footnotes, not in the body of the
sentence. Omit the words act, scene, line, book, volume, page,
except when referring by only one of them. Punctuate as indicated
In the second scene of the third act
In III.ii (still better, simply insert III.ii in parenthesis at the proper place in the sentence)
After the killing of Polonius, Hamlet is placed under guard (IV. ii. 14).
2 Samuel i:17-27
Othello II.iii 264-267, III.iii. 155-161
Titles. For the titles of literary works,
scholarly usage prefers italics with capitalized initials. The usage
of editors and publishers varies, some using italics with capitalized
initials, others using Roman with capitalized initials and with or
without quotation marks. Use italics (indicated in manuscript by
underscoring), except in writing for a periodical that follows a
different practice. Omit initial A or The titles
when you place the possessive before them.
Iliad;the Odyssey ;As You Like It; To a Skylark; The Newcomes;"To a Skylark," "Self-Reliance," A Tale of Two Cities; Dicken'sTale of Two Cities.
(Many of the words and expressions here listed are not so
English as bad style, the commonplaces of careless writing. As
illustrated under Feature, the proper
correction is likely to be not the replacement of one word or set of
words by another, but the replacement of vague generality by definite
statement.) Advice is a noun,
advise a verb.
Idiomatic in familiar speech as a
detached phrase in the sense, "Agreed," or "Go ahead." In other uses
better avoided. Always written as two words. An allusion differs
from a reference by not naming or describing the person or thing
referred to. Saying "We'll always have Paris" alludes, but does not
refer, to Casablanca. However, the distinction is often fine
and sometimes invisible.
And which, and who. Avoid these forms unless another relative clause precedes. In "These are dangerous animals, and which must be kept in cages", simply omit and.
As good or better than. Expressions of this type should be corrected by rearranging the sentence.
My opinion is as good or better than his.
My opinion is as good as his, or better (if not better).
As to whether. Whether is sufficient;
see under Rule 13. Bid. Takes the infinitive without to.
The past tense
But, preposition. But may be used as
a conjunction or as a preposition: "Everyone but me had already left."
This usage is
bade. Case. The Concise Oxford Dictionary
begins its definition of this word: "instance of a thing's occurring;
usual state of affairs." In these two senses, the word is usually
In many cases, the rooms were poorly ventilated.
Many of the rooms were poorly ventilated.
It has rarely been the case that any mistake has been made.
Few mistakes have been made.
See Wood, Suggestions to Authors, pp. 68-71, and Quiller-Couch, The Art of Writing, pp. 103-106.
Certainly. Used indiscriminately by some
speakers, much as others use very, to
intensify any and every statement. A mannerism of this kind, bad in
speech, is even worse in writing.
Often simply redundant, used from
a mere habit of wordiness.
Acts of a hostile character
Claim, vb. With object-noun, means lay
claim to. May be used with a dependent clause if this sense is
clearly involved: "He claimed that he was the sole surviving heir."
(But even here, "claimed to be" would be better.) Not to be used as a
substitute for declare, maintain, or charge.
Compare. To compare to is to point out
resemblances, between objects regarded as essentially of
different order; to compare with is mainly to point out
differences, between objects regarded as essentially of the same
order. Thus life has been compared to a pilgrimage, to a drama, to a
battle; Congress may be compared with the British Parliament. Paris
has been compared to ancient Athens; it may be compared with modern
London. Clever. This word has been greatly overused;
it is best restricted to ingenuity displayed
Effect, affect. Effect is a noun
meaning "result"; affect is a verb meaning "influence." (There
is an uncommon verb effect meaning "bring about, accomplish",
a rare verb affect meaning "pretend to" (now usually only in
the form affected), and a technical noun affect meaning
"expression of emotion"; avoid all of them in
Consider. Not followed by
as when it
means, "believe to be." "I consider him thoroughly competent."
Compare, "The lecturer considered Cromwell first as soldier and
second as administrator," where "considered" means "examined" or
Dependable. A needless substitute for reliable, trustworthy.
Due to. Incorrectly used for through,
because of, or owing to, in adverbial phrases: "He lost
the first game, due to carelessness." In correct use related as
predicate or as modifier to a particular noun: "This invention is
to Edison;" "losses due to preventable fires."
Effect. As noun, means result; as verb, means to bring about, accomplish (not to be confused with affect, which means "to influence").
As noun, often loosely used in perfunctory writing about fashions, music, painting, and other arts: "an Oriental effect;" "effects in pale green;" "very delicate effects;" "broad effects;" "subtle effects;" "a charming effect was produced by." The writer who has a definite meaning to express will not take refuge in such vagueness.
Etc. Not to be used of persons. Equivalent
to and the rest, and so forth, and hence not to be used if one
of these would be insufficient, that is, if the reader would be left
in doubt as to any important particulars. Least open to objection
when it represents the last terms of a list already given in full, or
immaterial words at the end of a quotation.
At the end of a list introduced by such
as, for example, or
any similar expression, etc. is incorrect. Fact. Use this word only of matters of a
kind capable of direct verification, not of matters of judgment. That
a particular event happened on a given date, that lead melts at a
certain temperature, are facts. But such conclusions as that Napoleon
was the greatest of modern generals, or that the climate of
California is delightful, however incontestable they may be, are not
On the formula the fact that, see under Rule 13.
Factor. A hackneyed word; the expressions of
which it forms part can usually be replaced by something more direct
His superior training was the great factor in his winning the match.
Heavy artillery is becoming an increasingly important factor in deciding battles.
Heavy artillery is playing a larger and larger part in deciding battles.
Feature. Another hackneyed word; like factor it usually adds nothing to the sentence in which it occurs.
A feature of the entertainment especially worthy of mention was the singing of Miss A.
(Better use the same number of words to tell what Miss A.
As a verb, in the advertising sense of
means "before the present"; formally means "ceremoniously",
or sometimes "according to form".
He, he or she, they. The usage of these words
after indefinite expressions such as
The writer may either reword the expression, often by using the passive
voice (which itself may be
avoided. Fix. Colloquial in America for arrange,
prepare, mend. In writing restrict it to its literary senses,
fasten, make firm or immovable, etc.
He is a man who. A common type of redundant expression; see Rule 13.
He is a man who is very ambitious.
He is very ambitious.
Spain is a country which I have always wanted to visit.
I have always wanted to visit Spain.
However. In the meaning nevertheless,
not to come first in its sentence or clause.
The roads were almost impassable. However, we at last succeeded in reaching camp.
The roads were almost impassable. At last, however, we succeeded in reaching camp.
When however comes first, it means in whatever way or to whatever extent.
However you advise him, he will probably do as he thinks best.
However discouraging the prospect, he never lost heart.
Kind of. Not to be used as a substitute for
rather (before adjectives and
verbs), or except in familiar
style, for something like (before nouns). Restrict it to its
literal sense: "Amber is a kind of fossil resin;" "I dislike that
kind of notoriety." The same holds true of sort of. Distinguish clearly between lay,
the present tense of the verb meaning "set down", and lay, the
past tense of the verb lie meaning "recline". Of course, the
verb lie meaning "to intentionally tell a falsehood" has the
past tense lied.
Should not be misused for
He had less men than in the
He had fewer men than in the previous campaign.
Less refers to quantity, fewer
to number. "His
troubles are less than mine" means "His troubles are not so great as
mine." "His troubles are fewer than mine" means "His troubles are not
so numerous as mine." It is, however, correct to say, "The signers of
the petition were less than a hundred, "where the round number, a
hundred, is something like a collective noun, and less is
thought of as meaning a less quantity or amount. Line, along these lines. Line in the
sense of course of procedure, conduct, thought, is allowable,
but has been so much overworked, particularly in the phrase along
these lines, that a writer who aims at freshness or originality
had better discard it entirely.
Mr. B. also spoke along the same lines.
Mr. B. also spoke, to the same effect.
|Literal, literally. Often incorrectly used
in support of exaggeration or violent metaphor.
A literal flood of abuse
A flood of abuse
Literally dead with fatigue
Almost dead with fatigue (dead tired)
Lose out. Meant to be more emphatic than
lose, but actually less so, because of its commonness. The
same holds true of try out, win out, sign up, register up.
With a number of verbs, out and up form idiomatic
combinations: find out, run out, turn out, cheer up, dry up, make
up, and others, each distinguishable in meaning from the simple
verb. Lose out is not.
Most. Not to be used for almost.
Most all the time
Almost all the time
Nature. Often simply redundant, used like
Acts of a hostile nature
Often vaguely used in such expressions as "a lover of nature;" "poems about nature." Unless more specific statements follow, the reader cannot tell whether the poems have to do with natural scenery, rural life, the sunset, the untracked wilderness, or the habits of squirrels.
Near by. Adverbial phrase, not yet fully
accepted as good English, though the analogy of close by and
hard by seems to justify it. Near, or near at
hand, is as good, if not better.
Not to be used as
an adjective; use neighboring. Oftentimes, ofttimes. Archaic forms, no
longer in good use. The modern word is often.
One hundred and one. Retain the and in this and similar expressions, in accordance with the unvarying usage of English prose from Old English times.
One of the most. Avoid beginning essays
or paragraphs with this formula, as, "One of the most interesting
developments of modern science is, etc.;" "Switzerland is one of the
most interesting countries of Europe." There is nothing wrong in
this; it is simply threadbare and forcible-feeble. People. The people is a political
term, not to be confused with the public. From the people
comes political support or opposition; from the public comes artistic
appreciation or commercial patronage.
word people is not to be used with words of number, in
place of persons. If of "six people" five went away, how many
"people" would be left? Phase. Means a stage of transition or
development: "the phases of the moon;" "the last phase." Not to be
used for aspect or topic.
Another phase of the subject
Another point (another question)
Possess. Not to be used as a mere
substitute for have or own.
He possessed great courage.
He had great courage (was very brave).
He was the fortunate possessor of
Respective, respectively. These words may
usually be omitted with advantage.
Works of fiction are listed under the names of their respective authors.
Works of fiction are listed under the names of their authors.
The one mile and two mile runs were won by Jones and Cummings respectively.
The one mile and two mile runs were won by Jones and by Cummings.
In some kinds of formal writing, as in geometrical proofs, it may
be necessary to use respectively, but it
should not appear in
writing on ordinary subjects. So. Avoid, in writing, the use of so
as an intensifier: "so good;" "so warm;" "so delightful."
On the use of so to introduce clauses, see Rule 4.
Sort of. See under Kind
State. Not to be used as a mere substitute
for say, remark. Restrict it to the sense of express fully
as, "He refused to state his objections." Student body. A needless and awkward
expression, meaning no more than the simple word students.
A member of the student body
Popular with the student body
Liked by the students
The student body passed resolutions.
The students passed resolutions.
System. Frequently used without need.
Dayton has adopted the commission system of government.
Dayton has adopted government by commission.
The dormitory system
Thanking you in advance. This sounds as if
the writer meant, "It will not be worth my while to write to you
again." Simply write, "Thanking you," and if the favor which you have
requested is granted, write a letter of acknowledgment.
They. A common inaccuracy is the use of the plural pronoun when the antecedent is a distributive expression such as each, each one, everybody, every one, many a man, which, though implying more than one person, requires the pronoun to be in the singular. Similar to this, but with even less justification, is the use of the plural pronoun with the antecedent anybody, any one, somebody, some one, the intention being either to avoid the awkward "he or she," or to avoid committing oneself to either. Some bashful speakers even say, "A friend of mine told me that they, etc."
Use he with all the above words, unless the antecedent is or must be feminine.
Very. Use this word sparingly. Where emphasis is necessary, use words strong in themselves.
Viewpoint. Write point of view, but
do not misuse this, as many do, for view or
While. Avoid the indiscriminate use of this
and, but, and although. Many writers use it
frequently as a substitute for and or but, either from
a mere desire to vary the connective, or from uncertainty which of
the two connectives is the more appropriate. In this use it is best
replaced by a semicolon.
The office and
The office and
Its use as
a virtual equivalent of although is allowable in
sentences where this leads to no ambiguity or absurdity.
While I admire his energy, I wish it were employed in a better cause.
This is entirely correct, as shown by the paraphrase,
I admire his energy; at the same
timeI wish it were employed in a better cause.
While the temperature reaches 90 or 95 degrees in the daytime, the nights are often chilly.
Although the temperature reaches 90 or 95 degrees in the daytime, the nights are often chilly.
The temperature reaches 90 or 95 degrees in the daytime; at the same time the nights are often
the use of while is incorrect.
In general, the writer will
do well to use while only with
strict literalness, in the sense of during the time that. Whom. Often incorrectly used for who
before he said or similar expressions, when it is really the
subject of a following verb.
His brother, whom he said would send him the money
His brother, who he said would send him the money
The man whom he thought was his friend
The man who (that) he thought was his friend (whom he thought his friend)
Worth while. Overworked as a term of vague
approval and (with not) of disapproval. Strictly applicable
only to actions: "Is it
worth while to telegraph?"
His books are not
His books are not worth reading (not worth one's while to read; do not repay reading).
The use of worth while before a noun ("a worth while story") is indefensible.
Would. A conditional statement in the first person requires should, not would.
I should not have succeeded without his help.
The equivalent of shall in indirect quotation after a verb in the past tense is should, not would.
He predicted that before long we should have a great surprise.
To express habitual or repeated action, the past tense, without would, is usually sufficient, and from its brevity, more emphatic.
Once a year he would visit the old mansion. Once a year he visited the old mansion. accidentally formerly privilege advice humorous pursue affect hypocrisy repetition beginning immediately rhyme believe incidentally rhythm benefit latter ridiculous challenge led sacrilegious criticize lose seize deceive marriage separate definite mischief shepherd describe murmur siege despise necessary similar develop occurred simile disappoint parallel too duel Philip tragedy ecstasy playwright tries effect preceding undoubtedly existence prejudice until fiery principal Write any one, every one, some one, some time (except the
sense of formerly) as two words.
VI. Words Often Misspelled
Write to-day, to-night, to-morrow (but not together) with hyphen.
Once a year he would visit the old mansion.
Once a year he visited the old mansion.
Write any one, every one, some one, some time (except the sense of formerly) as two words.